Disease
It just took few months;
Rather days,
To make u away from me...
Endless efforts to hold u;
All in vain...
Helpless I was and I am forever
For Life, To Life...
A disease I am also left with now, Emotions,
Uncontrollable...
They have shaped up to a second syndrome;
Incurable, Untreatable...
How long I would cover this,
Carry this.
Hold this....
Helplessness to them...
Even the gathered strength;
Is just fading away,
Floating away.....................!
Regrets to my close one's if they have floated up reading this...
हिंदी ब्लॉग दोस्तों से भी माफ़ी चाहूँगा, फिलहाल इस रचना को अंग्रेजी में ही पढ़ा पाऊंगा...
Regrets to my close one's if they have floated up reading this...
हिंदी ब्लॉग दोस्तों से भी माफ़ी चाहूँगा, फिलहाल इस रचना को अंग्रेजी में ही पढ़ा पाऊंगा...
14 comments:
it was really nice poem.. keep writing more
बहुत सुंदर, रचना अच्छी लगी.....
new post--काव्यान्जलि : हमदर्द.....
बहुत ही बढ़िया।
सादर
nice one prakash....
So touching..
A helpless scream I can listen in your write up!
apki yah rachana bhi bahut acchi lagi..
Bhai........i m with you ever n' forever.......... missing u....
achchha likha hai..
प्रशंसनीय...
vikram7: महाशून्य से व्याह रचायें......
very nice .
Helpless, for life, to life ..how true and deep are those words ! Needless to say, your words strike a chord with thoughts, and memories of past along with philosophical thoughts,swing ..
very nice ..... keep it up !!!
It happens when u get broken down... nice one.
सुंदर प्रस्तुति,बेहतरीन पोस्ट
welcome to new post...वाह रे मंहगाई
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