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Saturday, January 14, 2012

Helpless...

Disease
It just took few months; 
Rather days,
To make u away from me...

Endless efforts to hold u;
All in vain...
Helpless I was and I am forever
For Life, To Life... 

A disease I am also left with now, Emotions,
Uncontrollable...
They have shaped up to a second syndrome;
Incurable, Untreatable...

How long I would cover this, 
Carry this.
Hold this....
Helplessness to them...
Even the gathered strength; 
Is just fading away, 
Floating away.....................!


Regrets to my close one's if they have floated up reading this...


हिंदी ब्लॉग दोस्तों से भी माफ़ी चाहूँगा, फिलहाल इस रचना को अंग्रेजी में ही पढ़ा पाऊंगा...

15 comments:

shefali said...

it was really nice poem.. keep writing more

धीरेन्द्र सिंह भदौरिया said...

बहुत सुंदर, रचना अच्छी लगी.....
new post--काव्यान्जलि : हमदर्द.....

यशवन्त माथुर said...

बहुत ही बढ़िया।


सादर

आशा बिष्ट said...

nice one prakash....

Simran said...

So touching..
A helpless scream I can listen in your write up!

मेरा मन पंछी सा said...

apki yah rachana bhi bahut acchi lagi..

kamaalnivato said...

Bhai........i m with you ever n' forever.......... missing u....

Amrita Tanmay said...

achchha likha hai..

Shanti Garg said...

बहुत बेहतरीन और प्रशंसनीय.......
मेरे ब्लॉग पर आपका स्वागत है।

vikram7 said...

प्रशंसनीय...
vikram7: महाशून्य से व्याह रचायें......

Jeevan Pushp said...

very nice .

Ms. Capricious said...

Helpless, for life, to life ..how true and deep are those words ! Needless to say, your words strike a chord with thoughts, and memories of past along with philosophical thoughts,swing ..

निवेदिता श्रीवास्तव said...

very nice ..... keep it up !!!

Ruchi Jain said...

It happens when u get broken down... nice one.

धीरेन्द्र सिंह भदौरिया said...

सुंदर प्रस्तुति,बेहतरीन पोस्ट
welcome to new post...वाह रे मंहगाई

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